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Free writing....

May 15, 2008 / by aj8472

Inspired by the ending of a relationship.

 

Breathe

 

The night, cool and crisp,

Standing, looking for you,

To come into my arms again.

Could it be that I have lost you,

To the stranger you have become.

Could it be that I am fading,

Hoping you will let me back in.

The stars, looking they stare,

Waiting, wanting to see,

If you will return to the person I knew,

Or if you will leave, like the breath I breathe.

In limbo I wait, to see if you come back

In limbo I live because I don't know where you stand

In limbo I die, that part of me that loves you.

My heart is yours, because you refuse to give it back.

So I'll wait with a hole in my chest.

 

 

 

 

2 comments on Free writing....

  • queenie said 6 months ago

    Your writing is so palpable; the feelings come through so strongly

    .....knowing the end is near is the hardest part.

  • aj8472 said 6 months ago

    thank you

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